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undomiel
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« on: February 18, 2008, 08:34:28 am »

  Toamna din Noi


Toamna aceasta
a-nceput īntr-o joi;
(parcul pustiu se pierduse īn noapte)
sub aburii calzi
ai sălbaticei ploi, doar castanii
ascultau bănuitele şoapte.



Trupul tău miroase curat,
crucificat de vāntul
ce se zbate-ntre ramuri.
(ultima ta femeie, ultimul tău bărbat)
doi străini ce privesc
prin străinele geamuri.



Īmpărţim pe alei, paşii noştri, la doi...
... toamna venise cu fulare de ploi.
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« Reply #1 on: February 19, 2008, 10:39:03 am »

Opa ce avem noi aici, primul poet si pare a fi unu romantic Cheesy. Foarte draguta poezia, imi place...ai reusit sa combini toamna cu dragostea. Imi place ca exteriorizezi trairile interioare prin manifestari ale vremii, si binenteles nelipsita magie a noptii...super Smiley. si bun venit in mica noastra familie care sper sa mai creasca:D
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